Kamis, 15 November 2007

My Diary

Dear my diary

My unit is about government . I like to join violin because I like violin.
I intersting about government and writer life.
Diary will I cange club? if sure I will change soccer if not I will stay in karate?.
Diary my goal is to type a hundred word per minute. Diary more bigger I will
author. if I die people must publish about my life. this last goal I want Im the famous
author.



ok we end here first tomarrow we continue again ok .

1 komentar:

pierre_pineda mengatakan...

Hi Mirai!

I have enjoyed reading your posts. It seems to me that you know what's happening in your classes and you remember them clearly.

I wish you can write a more organized paragraph by focusing on one big idea you want to talk about and then provide details of it.

Continue writing and you'll see the benefit of this as we move along.